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| Well, this has nothing to do with writing (is this my first post that doesn't? I think so), but I feel it's something I want to say. Even though no one shall read it. It seems to me that there is this common misconception amongst schools, school teachers and school administrators, and anyone else who has an opinion about the study habits of teenagers, that music should not be played when they are studying or doing schoolwork. According to them, it is a distraction and will affect the quality of their work detrimentally. I find the opposite to be true. I'm sure I'm not the only one. Whenever I play music, it helps me concentrate and puts me in a sort of "zone." Without it, I find things simply too boring and quiet, and get distracted more easily. So how did this idea that listening to music during homework is bad get started? I have no idea, but it irks me because, as with so many other things, they make this blanket statement for everyone and just assume that it is true. Thus, they tell us all not to listen to music when studying, they ban MP3s from our study halls and just generally lump us all under this "music will distract you" category. Annoying.
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| I actually wrote something. Oh my God. Well, it's pretty bad (in my opinion). But still -- it's something. I'm out of practice, I admit. I need to start writing again. I will start writing again; I have to, actually. Postable stuff, that is, not just papers and whatnot. This is because I am in a Fantasy Lit. class, and I have to do this Final Project in place of a Final Exam, and I chose to write an indeterminate number of related short stories for an anthology I have planned. I'd also like for them to not suck, so that means I have to actually put time into them... curses. Anyways here's my newest story. I'm not sure if I'll post it on Fictionpress.com yet. Possibly after I polish it a bit. Maybe if anyone ever actually reads this, I'll get feedback?... Maybe not.
To the Nines
“For
those of you getting off at Raleigh, the temperature is a lovely 72° F,
partially cloudy. The local time is 1:20
in the afternoon. We hope you have a
lovely time, thank you for flying with Southwest Airlines.”
Huffing,
Daniel tugged his oversized carry-on off out of the overhead bin, rolling it
down the aisle and out into the air-conditioned connecting hallway. Already late, he hurried, his long legs
moving at a ground-eating pace.
“I
just hope there’s not any distractions,” he muttered to himself. “The last thing I need is another delay. I’m already so far behind schedule, I’ll
never catch up.”
Weaving
his way to the proper baggage claim, Daniel flopped down, as exhausted as if he
had been running a marathon, as opposed to simply sitting on a plane since
early in the morning. Finally, after what felt like hours of waiting, the first
of his two small suitcases came ambling down the conveyor belt. Crawling along at a snail’s pace, it was easy
for Daniel to catch hold of the handle and heft it off of the carousel.
Settling
down on his suitcase instead of the ground this time, he tapped his foot
impatiently as he waited for his second bag.
As he absently hummed to himself, he spotted a woman weaving her way
through the crowd easily, avoiding bumping into anyone despite the crowd. As she came closer, Daniel could spot her
very out of place dress: a black, strapless evening gown that swept the floor,
falling in elegant folds of fabric; heels so tall he was amazed she could walk
in them at all, let alone with such grace; a choker of diamonds that glittered
at her white throat with matching earrings and bracelet; make-up light but
tasteful and auburn hair sleekly done up in a French twist – all-in-all, she
was ready for a state dinner at the White House, not an airport at just before
two in the afternoon. Remembering the
movie he had watched in-flight, Daniel breathed to himself, “Wow, what a Bond
girl.”
Unable
to tear his eyes from her slender, elegant form, Daniel watched as she paused
right beside a much more casually dressed man.
Even as he gazed, riveted on the absurd spectacle, The Man carefully passed
a package wrapped in what looked like ordinary, brown postal-packaging. Yet The Woman accepted the package with as
much care as one would give a newborn baby, wrapping it in a lace shawl that
had previously been wrapped around her shoulders. The Woman then took something, too tiny for
Daniel to see, from her small, black evening purse and handed it over to the
man. Oddly, as he glanced around
self-consciously, no one else seemed to be taking note of this very note-worthy
exchange. It was as if they had better
things to be doing…
With
a jolt, Daniel remembered his own baggage.
He turned briefly to the carousel, checked off that his other bag was
not currently passing him by, and turned back to The Woman and The Man…
…Only
to find that they had both disappeared, merging back into the crowd. Daniel thought he barely caught a swish of
black fabric slide out the glass doors, but could not be sure as his shook his
head, resolving to think more on it later.
So yeah. Maybe I'll continue. Probably not. After all, I have little enough time/motivation to write as it is. | | |
| ORSON SCOTT CARD HAS A NEW BOOK OUT! IT FITS WITH THE ENDER UNIVERSE! I CAN DIE HAPPY! Okay, not quite. But still, I do so love Orson Scott Card's books. I am aware that many people love his work. That is not why I read his books. I have read all of the Ender-centered ones, but not the Bean-centered ones -- odd, because I do love Bean (he's adorable. "Did you see it! Did you see it! Did you see how fast I went! Did you see how I changed direction!"). Start from the beginning: I love to read. I read all the time. It's my pet hobby. Because of this, my mom sometimes just picks up books for me from the library. Most recently, the book was A War of Gifts. This book is an Ender story, set during his time at the battle school. I shall tell you no more about the plot, but it is short (120-odd pages) and very sweet. Personally, my favorite Ender books (Ender-centric or Bean-centric) are the ones set during battle school, Ender's Game and Ender's Shadow. I know some people think Bean is annoying, that all of the books after Ender's Game are just cheap spin offs, yada yada yada. I don't agree. True, I've only gotten through half of Shadow of Hegemon, but I think when I started reading the Bean section the last one or two Bean books weren't even out yet. I didn't enjoy Speaker of the Dead (of? for? I can never keep track of which one it is, mainly because I read the preface and Card said he went back and forth... I think), Xenocide or Children of the Mind as much as Ender's Game, but I did enjoy them. Perhaps it's because I was in middle school (wow, that's getting to be kind of far away, time-wise!) when I read them (yes, all of them). Maybe it's just the type of story I was looking for when I read them. Either way, I love the interaction of all the Battle School kids, the games, the classes -- everything. I sincerely desire for Card to write more. A War of Gifts was a great early Christmas present. It even started me re-reading all the Ender books (well, actually the Bean ones right now), and I would love to see more expansion on these children that were so brilliant and so odd.
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| So, to make a long story short and repeat myself from my ff.net bio: I have no time. I signed for all of the classes which require the most work (the most labor-intensive classes offered, is how I've been putting it) and they all require lots of reading, writing and other work. Therefore, all my personal writing is on hold for a long time. I'm sorry, I love to write, but not with an exhaustive school day and a massive homework load. As a side note (to quote verbatim from my ff.net bio): Apocalypse Now: Trippiest movie ever? Trippiest movie ever.
"I love the smell of napalm in the morning."
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| I have decided to try a little... experiment. As you all (all who? No one reads this...) know, I have a pen name on ff.net. Under it, I post my stories that I've actually worked on, edited and feel are pretty decent. The only exception to this is my first piece, but hey, everyone's first story sucks, right? I was only in middle school or something anyways... But the point is, My Lunarmercury stories are ones I actually think about. Planning actually goes into them, as does effort. I feel they're more or less respectable (especially my Planet Ladder one. It's the first long, serious story under that category! Awesome! Now if only Planet Ladder would become popular...) Most of the stories under my main fandom (Yuu Yuu Hakusho) are not respectable in the least. They're error laden monstrosities, and almost all of them are Mary-Sues. Unfortunately, almost all of them have massive, unprecedented amounts of reviews -- positive reviews, at that. It's pathetic and disheartening. I think I'm going to write one of them. It won't be grammatically incorrect, nor will it have incorrect spelling. I simply can't bring myself to butcher English the way some of these girls do; it makes me want to cry and then gouge my eyes out with a rusty spork (especially since I'm almost positive I'm going to major in English in college, as well as something else related to writing... probably creative writing, but it depends on what college I'm going to attend). Now, this story will not be under my Lunarmercury pen name. I'm going to make a new one (something Hiei related, probably -- that's the general trend in those types of writers). The general story idea I already have. It's an idea from middle school, which should tell you how horrible it is. This girl that I'll make into the main character could be de-Sueified very easily. In fact, I'm going to have to add things to make her a Sue. I'm also going to pair her with Hiei, because that's one of the main things Mary-Sue authors do. I am doing this to see how many more reviews I get for a terrible, unoriginal fic like that than I do for my fics that I toil over in an attempt at creativity and originality. This fic will have it all: cliches, purple prose for the Sue and no one else, trite and unrealistic romance, OOCness and more. It's guaranteed to be horrible. At the very last chapter (in which the Mary-Sue dies, by the way, and everyone is devastated by her death even though they shouldn't be), it'll do an abrupt about face: I'll do decent description, lose the cliches and have Hiei pair up with Kurama. My author's note will explain that this was an experiment, that I consider this fic and all the Mary-Sue fics awful, and that I'll allow a few weeks for feedback, then delete the fic. At that point, my profile will consist of one word: PWND. It'll be fun. It'll probably make me cry, too; I'm bound to get a fair amount of reviews that I don't deserve. Or maybe I'll get the exact same amount. That would be kind of funny. Also, I plan on having this xanga as the homepage in my new profile. If anyone discovers that it's all a big joke to me, I wonder how they'll react? Better, I wonder how everyone will react when my lovely, het, Hiei/OC romance becomes Boy-Love Kurama/Hiei? Oh, I hope it'll be fun... Let's see how this works out.
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